Thanks Neural. Really appreciate your close reading.
I was wondering if the use of the 'turn', into a metaphor for the relationship 'landed'. or should I add another clue? But if you got it, that's fine and I can let it rest.
I was interested in writing something that somehow inhabited the space between real and simile. Your personal experience of hanging on, sounds worthy of your own account. Have you written about it. My personal experience is only via metaphor and dreams... and of course relationships :)
Lovely ratcheting up of the tension quotient with humour to boot! Now how does this take us into the next chapter?
Thanks Neural. Really appreciate your close reading.
I was wondering if the use of the 'turn', into a metaphor for the relationship 'landed'. or should I add another clue? But if you got it, that's fine and I can let it rest.
I was interested in writing something that somehow inhabited the space between real and simile. Your personal experience of hanging on, sounds worthy of your own account. Have you written about it. My personal experience is only via metaphor and dreams... and of course relationships :)